Thursday, August 27, 2026

1918 - Time Machine


 The Sunday Whirl presented these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece. 

waves cake strays strand churning spot buzz colors sudden flow early stirring


D'verse Poets has an Open Night too.



Time Machine.


I


The Kenwood—it was hers.

It shudders and buzzes

As it churns the thick mixture.

Given the chance

It would walk off the bench.

Did once.

It has a fruitcake mixture in it.

Granny’s recipe, by inheritance,

Mrs Kiers’ recipe, by attribution.

Butter, sugar, eggs, flour,

Spices, strands of peel,

Lots of fruit.  

No brandy, she was Methodist.

Finally, too much for the machine,

I take over the stirring.

The mixture flops, not flows

(fruitcake mix does not flow)

Into the paper lined tin,

And into the oven.

Then comes the aroma…



II


The aroma coming from the oven

Is a time machine—

Suddenly the mind strays 

To earlier days—

To memories that come

In the waves and colours

Of a special spot, 

A kitchen in my childhood:

Her work-worn hands,

Her face lined by life,

Her practical frocks and aprons,

The patterned lino floor

Of the kitchen where fruitcakes

Just magically appeared

From her old gas oven.

Same recipe.

Same Kenwood.






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11 comments:

  1. Just beautiful. For some reason, the lino floor in particular evoked the whole scene. Very lovely. I can smell the cake and the childhood from here. Thank you.

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  2. You created magic out of those words evoking a lovely memory.

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  3. I could smell the whiffs of nolstagia in this one! Loved it! 💛

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  4. I have some very similar memories! (Though it is a long time now since I myself made a fruit cake.) My mum's kitchen in Launceston; my Nan'as in Spreyton ... and eventually my own in Melbourne.Thanks for bringing it all back to me.

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  5. My mum still has the Kenwood she was given as a wedding present. Together with a noisy little machine for grinding coffee. She and they stand the test of time. This poem evokes such strong memories - delightful

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  6. Thank you for the nostalgic ride in your time machine, which made me smile and had me sniffing the air for a baking cake. It reminded me of baking with my grandmother – only she never had a Kenwood or any other machine – just elbow grease.

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  7. Delicious sensory memoir.

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  8. Love that trip through time and the circular moment! Beautifully described.

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  9. I agree, this was nostalgic is read. That aroma of home and the past are delicious.

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  10. I felt like this was a meditation - getting lost in thought and memory - Jae

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