Thursday, September 03, 2026

1920 - Immoral Compass

 

 The Sunday Whirl presented these twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece. 

velvet compass echo random rust silver shadow pebble stone drone clip dry





Immoral Compass


The ribbons are faded.

The velvet liner too.

The pins are rusted.

The silver is tarnished.

Recompense for a life lost.



Somewhere, 

With a well-clipped lawn

And white pebble paths,

A headstone

Declares the dry truth

Of a life cut short

By the random whims

Of the greedy or ambitious.

Their decisions

Cast long shadows

And echo through time,

Through broken families

For generations to come.



Marcus liked to equate

Human society to a hive.

There is some truth in that:

Queens have drones and workers

To do their bidding,

To die for her, if needed.

Kings have soldiers.




Footnote: Marcus Aurelius (121–180 CE), 

Roman emperor and Stoic philosopher, 

frequently used the beehive as a metaphor for human society.

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1 comment:

  1. a master ful piece. Full of power and imagery. I loved the white pebble paths linked to the headstone and dry truth. Then the hives and people dying for different reasons. Very strong .

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