Sunday Scribblings had a topic called 'A New Leaf'.
A New Leaf
Turning a leaf to reveal new pages
Is a ritual passed on through the ages.
But it has no effect on
Most live's direction
As people feel safest in their cages.
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My New Year's resolution's a bold one,
As I know that my leaf is a gold one.
It beggars belief
To turn a new leaf
When I'm still quite enjoying the old one.
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Adam's wardrobe was very brief
It gave poor Eve no end of grief.
She used to say,
In her feminine way,
That he really should get a new leaf.
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© J Cosmo Newbery
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Turning a leaf to reveal new pages
Is a ritual passed on through the ages.
But it has no effect on
Most live's direction
As people feel safest in their cages.
◊◊◊
My New Year's resolution's a bold one,
As I know that my leaf is a gold one.
It beggars belief
To turn a new leaf
When I'm still quite enjoying the old one.
◊◊◊
Adam's wardrobe was very brief
It gave poor Eve no end of grief.
She used to say,
In her feminine way,
That he really should get a new leaf.
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© J Cosmo Newbery
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I always thought your leaves were pretty grubby...
ReplyDeleteHi! Thanks for your visit to my blog. I love the way you mix light and weighty in this poem. It raised a smile and made me ponder...Jae
ReplyDeleteHappy 2010 to you, may it be a great one,
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Zuzana
Great take on the prompt. Really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteI bow to you!!!
ReplyDeleteNice use of humor and truth in this prompt! Good stuff! Happy 2010!
ReplyDelete*applause*
ReplyDeleteVery well put, and great twist.
ReplyDeleteThree gems... great rhymes. Reading your poems is like ambling down a lovely, untrod path - something nice that you've never walked before. You never know quite what is around the bend and finding out is half the fun.
ReplyDeleteLong ago an elderly lady who was a family friend wrote in my autograph book---
ReplyDelete"It is not of much use to be entreated to turn over a new leaf
When you can see no kind of reason for doing so..." As in your ..."quite enjoying the old one."
Happy New Year to you Mr. Newbery!
I particularly like your second verse. Why turn over a new leaf when one is enjoying the old one?
ReplyDeleteVery nicely done!
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year darling :)
what a lovely surprise this was! Hope you will stick around - loved these!
ReplyDeleteSo delightfully funny!
ReplyDeleteWell Done!
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