The Sunday Whirl presents twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.
This weeks words are:
waves, slip, void, soul, restless, dark, chanting, flickering, pulse, chance, marble, fan
Pythia
The language of excitement is at best picturesque merely.
You must be calm before you can utter oracles.
-- Henry David Thoreau
The fumes come in waves
From cracks in the rock.
Attendant priestesses chant,
Hypnotic, rhythmic, throbbing—
In time with the pulse of the oracle.
There, seated on a tripod,
In the moonlight, flickering,
The petitioners, restless, wait
For their answer. Is it war?
Do we chance our arm? Or not?
Lives are at stake. Fortunes.
She sits quietly, surrounded
By the protective and the anxious,
A reflective soul in a trance,
Her mind mingling with the divine.
Oblivious to those around her,
She slips in and out of their world,
Their concerns, the dark voids
Of their fears and ambitions.
Cloistered in her marble temple,
Where flickering torches dance on stone,
Her answers ripple through the empire,
Like shadows cast and then gone.
And so she sits. And thinks.
Surety brings ruin.
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Dark, absorbing and beautiful.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written, and with a profound message (have you been taking lessons from the oracle?). I love the way you portray her, and feel sure you got it exactly right.
ReplyDeleteYou set an enchanting mood and gave each word its worth. :)
ReplyDeleteThis is enchanting and creates a atmosphere between reality and the not yet. Well crafted.
ReplyDeleteGood use of the words...a very interesting pagan experience!...
ReplyDeleteLike a scene from an epic movie that makes one wonder about the coming plot.
ReplyDeleteAn enrapturing peace. Reading nature gives a vibrant feeling. Nice.
ReplyDeleteDarkly intriguing!
ReplyDeleteA beautifully composed poem ... the last line brings chills. "Ruin."
ReplyDeleteQuite a word picture.
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