The Sunday Whirl presents twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.
This weeks words are:
trample crack swept untethered hum urge scrawled bees sky ritual leap brambles
Call of the Wild
“People from a planet without flowers would think
we must be mad with joy the whole time
to have such things about us.”
― Iris Murdoch
Hollyhocks, foxgloves,
Daisies and delphiniums.
I do so love that word.
Phlox are there too,
Both the plant and as a collective noun
For the floral herd.
Brambles too, of course.
The polite term
For this feral floral fantasy
Would be untethered.
Untrampled, unswept, unleashed.
Bees, butterflies and other insects
Hum and buzz, crawl, climb and nibble.
Mother nature sees an opportunity,
A crack in the restraints,
In the desire to impose order and ritual,
And leaps at the chance to run wild.
No need to urge her on,
The sky is calling.
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How I love feral florals.
ReplyDeleteSuch a joyous picture you paint!
ReplyDeleteOh I love your poem It dances. I especially 'love 'feral floral fantasy'
ReplyDeleteA wonderful celebration of nature - Jae
ReplyDeletethis really paints a vivid picture and is so expressive - love it
ReplyDeleteAnd leaps at the chance to run wild... I love that. My delphiniums were glorious, tall and brilliant blue, but got knocked down by a swift moving storm. I hope they come back.
ReplyDeleteThere's nothing like a field of wildflowers to make the heart a little lighter. It's not always easy to find a patch of them in suburbia, but what a delight when you do find one!
ReplyDeleteHow aptly you embedded each word to create a beautiful bouquet of words.
ReplyDeleteHollyhocks was my grandparent's favourite flower. You had me from the start.
ReplyDeleteI just love, 'feral floral fantasy'. Dare you to say it quickly ten times!
ReplyDeleteJim here -- Mom nature loves beauty, but like with a child's structure from wooden blocks, then tear it down.
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Iris is right...mad alright but not with joy:) Wishing you lovely floral fantasy thoughts for today... Rall
ReplyDeleteI love how you seemingly / effortlessly create wonderful poems from a list of random words! Cheers.
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