Wednesday, May 29, 2024

1610 - Call of the Wild

 

The Sunday Whirl presents twelve words for us to use in a creative writing piece.  
This weeks words are:

trample crack swept untethered hum urge scrawled bees sky ritual leap brambles



Call of the Wild

“People from a planet without flowers would think 
we must be mad with joy the whole time 
to have such things about us.” 
― Iris Murdoch

Hollyhocks, foxgloves, 
Daisies and delphiniums.
I do so love that word.
Phlox are there too,
Both the plant and as a collective noun 
For the floral herd.
Brambles too, of course.

The polite term 
For this feral floral fantasy
Would be untethered.
Untrampled, unswept, unleashed.
Bees, butterflies and other insects
Hum and buzz, crawl, climb and nibble.

Mother nature sees an opportunity,
A crack in the restraints, 
In the desire to impose order and ritual,
And leaps at the chance to run wild.
No need to urge her on,
The sky is calling.

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13 comments:

  1. Such a joyous picture you paint!

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  2. Oh I love your poem It dances. I especially 'love 'feral floral fantasy'

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  3. AnonymousMay 31, 2024

    A wonderful celebration of nature - Jae

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  4. this really paints a vivid picture and is so expressive - love it

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  5. And leaps at the chance to run wild... I love that. My delphiniums were glorious, tall and brilliant blue, but got knocked down by a swift moving storm. I hope they come back.

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  6. There's nothing like a field of wildflowers to make the heart a little lighter. It's not always easy to find a patch of them in suburbia, but what a delight when you do find one!

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  7. How aptly you embedded each word to create a beautiful bouquet of words.

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  8. Hollyhocks was my grandparent's favourite flower. You had me from the start.

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  9. I just love, 'feral floral fantasy'. Dare you to say it quickly ten times!

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  10. AnonymousJune 02, 2024

    Jim here -- Mom nature loves beauty, but like with a child's structure from wooden blocks, then tear it down.
    ..

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  11. AnonymousJune 02, 2024

    Iris is right...mad alright but not with joy:) Wishing you lovely floral fantasy thoughts for today... Rall

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  12. I love how you seemingly / effortlessly create wonderful poems from a list of random words! Cheers.

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