Three Word Wednesday requires participants
to use the three words of the week in a composition.
The words this week were: liberated, muddy and vicious.
100 years since WWI and we have learnt nothing.
100 years since WWI and we have learnt nothing.
Les Invalides
Lest we forget the fallen dead
Who died for what our leaders said
Was a cause both good and grand
Only to die in some muddy land,
So far from home and so misled,
Only to receive a wound instead.
There they fell and slowly bled,
Liberated by a death unplanned—
Lest we forget.
And those who didn’t die by lead,
Died internally, in their head;
Hearing the vicious inner command
To relive the torment of the damned
Until they withered on their bed—
Lest we forget.
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© J Cosmo Newbery 2014
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The boy ran fast in his muddy boots
ReplyDeleteA vicious blast and he fell on his foot
He stumbled and fell hard in pain
Another soul liberated from the rain
Thanks Shuubiz. Nice to see you drop in.
DeleteSo moving!
ReplyDeleteNot much glory in war. Only hurt, and dirt, and death (hard, lonely death at that).
ReplyDeletePeace, joy, and Bear hugs!
And money to the Halliburtons of this world.
DeleteThe state of war is entrenched in many ways....sadly...I would fight for possession of my own thoughts though
ReplyDeleteNot everyone is strong enough to win that fight. War requires men to do things that would be illegal in peace time and to see things that are hard to forget. Both create inner turmoil.
DeleteThank you. The internal damage is so lasting, so dangerous and often without cure.
ReplyDeleteLest We Forget...
ReplyDeleteVery true in cases of war weary survivors. They are dead, walking dead even if they survived the war. Nicely Cosmo!
ReplyDeleteThe dread and meaninglessness with a nod to John McCrae - the shellshock was a term that really came from WW I.
ReplyDeletei have seen an exhibit lately with sketches made during wwI - it was heart-breaking - and it is frightening that we didn't learn our lessons...
ReplyDeletegreat poem and a reminder, indeed, we have learned nothing.
ReplyDelete"Died internally, in their head" a piercing line...i don't understand one thing what is so glorious about killing?..everyone knows the fact still the big brother goes to war..ugh
ReplyDeleteNo matter how many times I see the images, read the poetry, consider the historical background, I can never get over the 16 million deaths.
ReplyDeleteExcellent great emotion in this and powerful words. Great tribute and reminder
ReplyDeletea wonderful tribute!! we often forget the sacrifices of those because of whom we live in peace!
ReplyDeleteWill we never learn?
ReplyDeleteso many of our soldiers come home to relive that was again and gain...and that is heartbreaking to me.....and we too often forget them...
ReplyDeleteYou have captured the horrors of war here, JC. We do need to continue to remember and honor those who served.
ReplyDeleteI grew up in a region where most of the battles of WWI were fought. I agree that we have indeed learnt very little.
ReplyDeleteThe after effects of war are just a brutal and tormenting our minds ~ I specially admire that second part ~
ReplyDeletePowerful words...you captured the heartache of war very well.
ReplyDeleteExcellent reminder...
ReplyDeleteZQ
Well said, especially the ones who "died in their head".......no one comes back from war undamaged.
ReplyDeleteShell shock and Trauma form a lingering death that lasts for ever.
ReplyDeleteMistakes of the past are quite often the most important lessons that life teaches us. Forgetting that is a sure-shot way of spiraling down a self-destructive path, if nothing else. Brilliantly penned, as always.
ReplyDeleteSo sad that humanity keeps repeating the same insane mistakes. You wrote something very meaningful here. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteLet us hope we always remember those fallen on the fields of France.
ReplyDeleteSo true..each and every word.
ReplyDeleteso many lost
ReplyDeleteover so many years
in so many wars
based on so many fears...
Cos, you and I must be psychically connected. My post is more "in dreams," etc., instead of my usual rants about war.
ReplyDeleteThis is undeniably effective. It could be in France then, in Iraq now, in Gaza (which is where I was thinking about). Your way with poetry, with the rhyme upon rhyme upon rhyme, then that refrain, "lest we forget," powerfully stated. I am in awe. Amy
Internal damage irreparable...
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