Fears built on sand, yes, lacking foundation. All that is built on sand will either wash away or be tossed aside by the winds. I loved this haiku, and I'm not a big fan of that form. Yours worked in all the best ways, Cos. Peace, Amy
Thanks Amy, I have only recently tried a few Haiku. Haiki? It's an interesting discipline. Can make you pull your hair out at times, tring to get the meaning within the syllable count.
Well for sure, J.C, one thinking I wouldn't want to be would be a sand castle. They are sooo fragile, it won't take much of a wave to disfigure them for live. My fears are more substantial I am afraid. ..
Lovely take on the prompt :)
ReplyDeleteSand, without tides, would be scary desert-ed places with dragons.
ReplyDeleteOh yeah...even a mighty dragon can't face nature's fury. Great take, Cosmo!!
ReplyDeleteNice take on sand!! That really is a formidable dragon!! Scary!! Thank goodness for the tide that washes it away!!
ReplyDeleteSeriously speaking J Cosmo it must be a laborious task making them and to think that the tide comes in twice a day to wash it all away!!
I really enjoyed the deeper meaning in your words and the hopefulness that many if not all of our fears will wash away with time!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful haiku and I agree with WabiSabi
ReplyDeletewise take, JCN ~ M
ReplyDeletecool take.
ReplyDeleteVery nicely written!
ReplyDeleteVery nice!
ReplyDeleteFears built on sand, yes, lacking foundation. All that is built on sand will either wash away or be tossed aside by the winds. I loved this haiku, and I'm not a big fan of that form. Yours worked in all the best ways, Cos. Peace, Amy
ReplyDeleteThanks Amy, I have only recently tried a few Haiku. Haiki? It's an interesting discipline. Can make you pull your hair out at times, tring to get the meaning within the syllable count.
DeleteWhy don't you stick to something you're good at, like limericks?
ReplyDeleteWell for sure, J.C, one thinking I wouldn't want to be would be a sand castle. They are sooo fragile, it won't take much of a wave to disfigure them for live. My fears are more substantial I am afraid.
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