Sunday Whirl (Wordle #116) presents a list of words
that we must incorporate in a writing piece.
The words this week are:
voices, impossible, scare, climb, risk, listen,
where, smoke, happens, pressure, might, orders
Smoke & Mirrors
The voices in the night,
Nagging,
Teasing,
Hinting at what might
Or might not,
Happen.
It is impossible
Not to listen,
Not to succumb to the pressure
Of the ceaseless
Chattering.
And then,
Come the morning,
Come the dawning of the day,
The light does not scare them away.
They still linger,
Nagging,
Teasing,
As you drive,
As you climb the stairs or
Almost anywhere.
They catch you unawares.
Ambush you.
Scare you.
Order you to listen
As if they are the only ones
That matter.
There is no smoke
Without fire,
Or so they say,
But in this fragmented
Kaleidoscope of the fanciful,
There is a risk that you
Are just fighting
Smoke and mirrors.
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© J Cosmo Newbery 2013
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Ha! You wrestled this bunch quite well, J Cosmo. I love the pieces that focused on the voices this week. Nicely penned!
ReplyDeleteYou hit the nail on the head.
ReplyDeleteI love the "fragmented kaleidoscope of the fanciful". Great write!
ReplyDeleteThose voices that rear their heads in my head just as I want to fall asleep....
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done and so freely flowing!! It just seems to follow me like the voices!!
ReplyDeleteI loved some of the words you used today like Nagging,Teasing,ceaseless chattering,ambush and Kaleidoscope!! You really outdid yourself today!!
This is indeed a great piece. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteImaginary or real, those fears will surely bring you down. As always, you're a master of the word, J Cosmo.
ReplyDeleteA fractured poem indicating distress and turmoil. A kaleidoscope of tortuous tease in dreams perhaps. I also liked the reference to the fragmented fanciful and its dissociation with reality. A well crafted ponder into the subconscious!
ReplyDeleteJ Cosmo! This rocks! Smoke and mirrors and your incredible way with words about covers it!
ReplyDeleteThere are always things waiting in the dark. The unknown is always scary.
ReplyDeleteA poignant write, J Cosmo. Excellent use of the words.
ReplyDeletePamela