Sunday Whirl (Wordle #127) presents a list of words
that we must incorporate in a writing piece.
The words this week are:
claws, peering, spirits, stories, apples, secret
cradle, pile, clues, exile, three, rash
The Power of Three
Superstitious stories abound
And make our life a tease;
Never more so than when they say
That bad things come in threes.
The origins are an old, dark secret,
Few clues point to the facts.
What evil spirits once declared
That misfortune hunts in packs?
But misfortune is a two edged sword
Not everybody shares;
Are we, by a rash assumption,
Comparing apples to our pears?
We’re in the claws of mad folderol:
From the cradle ‘til depart
Believing that the universe
Is disharmony, in three parts.
Peering through the perceived clouds
We miss the silver lining,
And exile our hopes to despair,
With superstitious whining.
But what if groups of three pile up
And then sneakily combine?
What if groups of threes, come in threes?
And misfortune comes in nines?
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© J Cosmo Newbery 2013
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Started off feeling slightly superstitious, now I'm feeling positively paranoid!
ReplyDeleteJust because you're paranoid, it doesn't mean that they are not our to get you!
DeleteMisfortune hunting in packs is a truly scary concept. Particularly for us slow runners.
ReplyDeleteCan't you here the hounds? A-wooooo...
DeleteAnd what if
ReplyDeletemisfortune comes in nines
And what if
misfortune comes in twelves
And what if
the sky tumbles down
and covers you
in a fug of black cloud
It's spring
Eat drink and especially get merry
Tell everyone to get stuffed!
Good to see you here Shereene. Did Darleen get her moccies back?
DeleteNah...she swapped them with her beautician for a brazilian...summer swimming season almost here...doesn't want to frighten the snorkellers!
DeleteHer parole officer would be proud of her.
DeleteWhy do I have visions of the Sargasso Sea?
DeleteBecause you have been reading Jean Rhys. What is my prize for giving the correct answer ? I hope it is something expensive!
DeleteA rare recording, on a scratchy EP, of John Howard and Tony Abbott singing "We are one, we are many" in front of a gently waving chorus of kelp.
DeleteGently waving chorus of kelp....nice line !
DeleteI'd watch that kinda talk..could land you in trouble. Team players don't talk like that. Too posh!
Me? In trouble? Never!
DeleteHahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha...cough...splutter....snifff...sorry.
DeletePint-sized peon! Go and sluice the stables!
Delete3 is bad enough.
ReplyDeleteI draw the line at worrying about 9!
I could have gone to three lots of three lots of three. The 27 horsemen of the box of chips.
DeleteI thought it was a lot of thrips?
DeleteI suggest a nice cup of tea and a wee lie down.
ReplyDeleteScalded myself when I fell off the bed holding the tea...
DeleteOne more to go then?
Deleteseee now how am i supposed to sleep when all those things are piling up ready to unleash a WMD of bad luck upon me?
ReplyDeletewhat is the name of the movie in the pic...the three amigos? i need to see that again...haha...
Tequilla. Lots of tequilla.
DeleteI suppose it was the rhyme and perhaps the illustration and perhaps the time -
ReplyDeletebut whatever the reason whatever the cause
I smile and offer a round of applause :)
Thank you.
Delete"Peering through the perceived clouds We miss the silver lining, And exile our hopes to despair, With superstitious whining."
ReplyDelete- Yes! Aint that the truth though.
Thank you. Well, I wrote it so i am hardly going to disagree! ;-)
DeleteTerrific poem.
ReplyDeleteTerrific, adj, derived from terror. Yep, that works.
DeleteI agree with Sreejit Poole, those lines are my fav too.. and the ending question scares me :)
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed the poem! But the writers/producers of that movie should have read it first!! :)
ReplyDeleteNah. Movie flops come in tens.
DeleteSo many options....and how many does joy come in?
ReplyDeleteOnes. But they can be big ones.
DeleteHmm be it any culture no " 3" has been associated with bad luck. But in Hinduisism there is a phrase that sings the virtue of " 3". It states that if you have no "3" then all your hurdles will be gone!
ReplyDeleteThe French have a menage a trois...
DeleteBad luck for some.
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ReplyDeletelast line is hilarious....... :D
Misfortune comes in nines. Yeah, that makes sense.
ReplyDeleteThis is so clever and witty. I can relate to misfortune coming in nines:)
ReplyDeleteI believe cats hope misfortune comes in eights, leave them the ninth for sleeping by the heater.
DeleteJust wonderful!! I really enjoyed this!
ReplyDeleteThis was a lot of fun to read - your play on words is outstanding.
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure I can do the math, but it sounds right to me!
ReplyDeleteStrike One, if you can't!
DeleteGreat rhythm in this J. It reads beautifully aloud.
ReplyDeletePamela
I found it worked best when recited under water.
DeleteYour photo made me smile but your words are just brilliant!
ReplyDeleteThere is another superstition about the Ring of Three. That it is the strongest defense and brings prosperity. The bad energy is released, only when or if the Ring of Three is broken. Then disaster follows. Like the rhythm and the sounds here, and especially those final lines.
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Damn those contrary theories! It's like the conflict between "Too many cooks spoil the broth" and "Many hands make light work"!
DeleteI've morphed into the Three Wise Monkeys...I decided it wiser to be that way!
ReplyDeleteI'm the fourth otherwise monkey.
DeleteYou have a point here as Alexander supposedly cut through the Gordian knot rather than undo it died a very early death. Clearly you can't beat fate. 3, 9 who is counting?
ReplyDeleteMe.
DeleteWhat's a three?
ReplyDeleteI apologiss for the SOM - she's not one for numbers.
DeleteHe's a shining wit, according to the good Dr Spooner.
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ReplyDeletewe superstitious cantonese like the number 3 because it sounds like "alive" in our language but we avoid taking photos with 3 persons in it. pretty contradictory, i know.
I don't believe in superstitons, touch wood.
DeleteHa ha -good one!
ReplyDeleteThat nines idea is just terrible! You made us think with this one.
ReplyDeleteOw
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