Sunday Whirl (Wordle #143) presents a list of words
that we must incorporate in a writing piece.
The words this week are:
illuminates, impact, remote, scenes, storm, one,
haunt, litter, need, pool, lifeless, price
Group Think.
In the remote past,
Scenes of turmoil;
A lifeless
But turbulent place
Feels the impact,
Reels to the impact
Of Nature.
Storms
Sweep the planet;
Lightning
Fractures the sky;
Illuminates the land.
Thunder,
A deferred timpani,
Grumbles behind.
Volcanoes
Litter the scene—
Sulphurous sores,
The weeping pores,
Of a fevered planet.
No ghosts dare
Haunt this place.
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In the midst
Of this cassoulet
Of what has been
Lives the promise
Of what will be.
On one afternoon
In one magical moment
In one small pool
Of warm and enriched water
Nothing happened.
But in the larger seas,
In a broader sense,
Over countless seasons,
Imperceptively,
And yet relentlessly,
Associations are made.
Different skills
Meet different needs.
Collaboration
And adaption,
The group
Outperforms
The individual.
And pays the price
Of survival.
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© J Cosmo Newbery 2014
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This is much deeper than that small pool.
ReplyDeleteSlipperier too. :-)
Deleteheavy.....
ReplyDeletePerhaps you would prefer my limerick site? :-\
DeleteYup; "the group outperforms the individual." But don't worry; there are lots of individuals contributing to the group.
ReplyDeletePeace and joy, Cosmo!
Thanks Bear.
DeleteIn scenes of old there were turbulence that affected little groups.They clung to each other and survived somehow! Well written Cosmo!
ReplyDeleteHank
It's like reading little clouds containing thunder! Quite moving.
ReplyDeleteThe soup of existence..the first verse was bitingly apocalyptic..the sores and heat. the second verse seemed like a solution..how to deal with such a haunting vista..rightly or wrongly..
ReplyDelete"cassoulet"--my new word for the day--thank you!!!!!
ReplyDeleteLitter
I thought the end was near. I wasn't very good with group projects in school, but glad this group came up with a solution!
ReplyDeletewe can hope the price is paid for survival,
ReplyDeletei like your approach in this, going back to go forward
its effective....
I liked your beginning....and the outcome.
ReplyDeletegrumbles. thinking, volcano, more of a family than a group think, perhaps. Very effective
ReplyDeleteBrilliant .. and hopeful!
ReplyDeleteThere's a lot to take in here! Excellent.
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure I like the group overcoming the individual, but I do love the power of the writing in this.
ReplyDeletePea
I love your description of the pool!
ReplyDeleteReally like the word choice: cassoulet. It signals the coming of order, proper or not. The price or cost of survival.
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
The last five lines of the first stanza are powerful lines.
ReplyDeleteA wonderful write! I especially love the first stanza, describing events on the planet. And "no ghosts dare haunt this place" is perfection.
ReplyDeletewas it Spock who opined, the needs of the many outweigh the needs of the one? ~
ReplyDeleteLove the amazing active verbs turbulent in the first stanza changing to imperceptible movement ad verbs of stasis in the second. Survival depends on groups willing to hold on to each other.
ReplyDeleteNow this was really beautiful and powerful too.
ReplyDeleteEvolution is not about the individual it is always about the group/species. I enjoyed reading this and thinking about it.
ReplyDeleteWow!! This is both beautiful and thought provoking.
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