Tuesday, June 04, 2013

525 : The Crime Scene

Mad Kane has a regular limerick challenge.
She provides the first line,
the rest is up to us.

The lad, Jack, was feeling quite ill,
After fetching some water with Jill.
In the original rhyme, 
They glossed over a crime:
He was pushed, not fell, down the hill.

© J Cosmo Newbery 2013

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  1. AnonymousJune 05, 2013

    Ha ha - good one!

  2. hmmm...I knew there was more to this old tale than meets the eye.


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